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-I am recommending Arthur Grisel-Davy for the scholarship offered by the Cybersecurity and Privacy Institute (CPI). I have supervised Arthur in first in 2019 when he was a visiting student discovering the world of research, and then again since 2021 in their doctoral studies.
+I am recommending Arthur Grisel-Davy for the Cybersecurity and Privacy Excellence Graduate Scholarships.
+I have supervised Arthur first in 2019 when he was a visiting student discovering the world of research, and then again since 2021 in his doctoral studies.
 
-I have seen Arthur learn the ... of academic research, sometime by making mistakes, but always by learning how to overcom challenges and striving to become a better scientist.
-Arthur has consistently demonstrated dedication, creativity, and scholarly achievement throughout their studies in our research group.
-His commitment to advancing the field of cybersecurity and privacy is evident in [his/her] motivation, ideas, accomplishments, and publications in reputable journals.
+I have seen Arthur learn the ... of academic research by always learning how to overcom challenges and striving to become a better scientist.
+Arthur has consistently demonstrated dedication, creativity, and scholarly achievement throughout his studies in our research group.
+His commitment to advancing the field of cybersecurity and privacy is evident in his motivation, ideas, accomplishments, and publications in reputable journals.
 
-Along his studies, Arthur also undertook the role of advisor for other younger students.
-He is 
+Along his studies, Arthur also undertook the role of advisor for younger students.
+He shares his experience of conducting experiments and writing articles with a few students each term.
 
-Arthur Grisel-Davy is a person of integrity, professionalism, and a collaborative spirit, making [him/her] a valuable member of our academic community. [His/Her] willingness to mentor other students further demonstrates [his/her] commitment to academic excellence and community engagement.
+Arthur is a person of integrity, professionalism, and a collaborative spirit, making him a valuable member of our academic community.
+His willingness to mentor other students further demonstrates his commitment to academic excellence and community engagement.
 
-In conclusion, I believe that Arthur Grisel-Davy would be a deserving recipient of the [Specific Scholarship Name] from the CPI. I am confident that [his/her] continued contributions will have a positive impact on the field of cybersecurity and privacy.
+I believe that Arthur Grisel-Davy would be a deserving recipient of this scolarship.